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    Claire
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    @stevenbutala

    Hey other new members and Steven

    In my mailer text, I obviously can’t say I’ve been in business for 10 years and completed thousands of transactions, nor would I want to say I just started my business and I’m completely new to this. Should I omit the sentence? Or try a substitution? Something like…We’re a family owned company and will give you individualized service and have our full attention. Steven, I wondered if you’d tested any other general statements about your business.

    Thanks,
    Claire

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  • Jill DeWit
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    Have to weigh in here… I think your substitution is fantastic! That would get my attention. And if I can immediately locate you online, see your website, etc. then I am sure you are legitimate.

    Nice job Claire!

    Claire
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    Thanks @jilldewit. I don’t want to undo the work that you guys had done in your mailer testing.

    Kevin Rhatigan
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    @claire

    Hi Claire,
    Sounds like a great idea! I’m sure a lot of us are thinking along the same lines.

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